Ooo, that's a fun one! The leg moves and especially the way the feet drag and flop is really great.
I think the neck flopping could look a little more fluid, it seems to me like the head isn't "weighting" it enough - like, it's moving too much in the middle of the neck, whereas the weight of the head at the end should make that end move the most with progressively less movement toward the body end.
This one isn't a crit, but I'd like to see this one with the shoulder motion reversed from the hips - so the body is twisting opposite on every step instead of following the hips. That might be interesting!
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Ooo, that's a fun one! The leg moves and especially the way the feet drag and flop is really great.
I think the neck flopping could look a little more fluid, it seems to me like the head isn't "weighting" it enough - like, it's moving too much in the middle of the neck, whereas the weight of the head at the end should make that end move the most with progressively less movement toward the body end.
This one isn't a crit, but I'd like to see this one with the shoulder motion reversed from the hips - so the body is twisting opposite on every step instead of following the hips. That might be interesting!
Lookin' good!
Ah crap, the shoulders were supposed to be opposing! Thanks for the feedback, totally agree with you about the head feeling too light.
Hey Katy, did you figure out how to export as a mov from PAP? It'd be SWEET if I could toggle through frame by frame to give some helpful feedback.
Yeah a Quicktime would be great...actually if you have the frames I could just Premiere it up for ya.
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